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Neal Thompson's avatar

loved this on all levels

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MAG's avatar

Sorry about Albert. May his memory forever be a blessing.

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Luisa Weiss's avatar

More of this, please. So good. I'm so sorry about Albert.

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Hannah Gersen's avatar

This is very relatable, the two sides of the brain, with the part that is looking at the text from the outside and then being inside the draft. I really love writing first drafts--maybe a little much because I draft so many stories and essays and then never want to take the time to revise them for publication, I just want to start something new and be in that bubble where I don't have to think about the audience.

Thank you for sharing Albert's story. I love that you are incorporating knowledge he passed on to you in your new book.

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Molly Wizenberg's avatar

Love love love.

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Liana Hornyak's avatar

What a beautiful, motivating piece...but also that plant you linked to is the bane of my existence.

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Edan Lepucki's avatar

It's in the wild canyon behind my house...and it is out of control!

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Liana Hornyak's avatar

It’s nearly impossible to eradicate once established. It’s taken over entire neighborhoods in Denver, where I live. I’ve been known to pull seedlings from public spaces, strangers’ yards, wherever.

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Fantasma.'s avatar

That was really beautiful, thank you for sharing. You vividly articulate the internal hurdles we need to get over to inhabit the worlds we write. Always a battle.

Peace be with Albert and his loved ones. We’ll keep writing to celebrate we are alive.

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Abby Rasminsky's avatar

I love this.

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Chloe's avatar

Wow. So thoughtful. Really appreciated insight into the writing process.

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Heather Waugh's avatar

I loved everything about this piece, you touched on so many struggles writers go through that freezes their progress. I know, I stopped for 10 years and am CREEPING back into it. The harrowing news of your friend puts it all in perspective - just do what you love. Thank you for sharing!

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